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Reviews For: The Mall

jameslouise 2008-01-22 . chapter 1

hehe love your story.
jamie

beaneyes30 2007-10-25 . chapter 1

love it! can't wait for more.

Lady of Confusion 2007-10-25 . chapter 1

interesting...UPDATE SOON!

MissMysterious 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

Yea I like it better here that you can add your own stuff rather than it being a fanfic. I love it.

Pieces of the sun 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

nice, update soon

Paige Evans 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

Awesomeness! Can't wait to read more.
-Paige

Twilightaddict 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

love the story. Please update soon.

texaslonghornfn 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

I like it!
The whole Delilah and the Plain White T's shirt was cute. Keep writing. ;)

SummerBaby94 2007-10-21 . chapter 1

sounds like a really good story so far! i can't wait for their date. =)