I completely get this, and it's so true. So amny young girls fall head over heels in love but then "magically" a month or even a few days after saying "I love you!", they break up and move on to the next and repeat the cycle. You did an excellent job of using bolding, italices, periods, slashes and just plain old everything to get your point across. No critizes (or whatever) from me!

Great poem.

Twilight Starr

nice work. you are right about the never and forever. goodwork

i like it, a lot. the formating and fancy use of bold and italics and such i guess adds to it but i think it kind of distracts a little too. other than that, nice one.