This was a deep story, I liked it. It is different than the other ones of yours that I read. It's really concise but that's okay. Wow, I wish I could write like that.

Good chapter. Sometimes, the muse inspires us to write another chapter. I like the concept of the bookstore and the relationship with Conrad.

~SirScott

That is amazing that they long for the same thing. I would say that most people are forgotten about fifty years after they die. So most people write, paint, compose music for the hopes that part of them would live on.

~SirScott

hmm, interesting beginning. i speak a little german, so this might help me brush up, haha, especially if i can see if i can find a problem :D. I just finished a really depressing play, Death of A Salesman, so this was somehow an odd pick-me-up.