love it:) the simplicity is nice. just a question. thats all. and a good one at that. i feel like it is much too blurry in my life as to who exactly is helping me and harming me. its one of the hardest questions for me.

I would want to know the answer to that question, too.

Nice, little short poem.

Twilight Starr

konban wa

I liked that last line a lot. Great, abrupt way to end it. :) I think you should lengthen the first line somehow because it throws off the balance of the poem. Maybe even if you just spaced it out really - that might even be enough. Like:

You know that style. Or else put the poem in the middle of the page so that it's sort of balanced in a way. *shrug*

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-Shan-