Able to relate with this poem, coincide with its message in a different light. Flawless and stunning, your work is beauty.

Stephen

great job ! i love the paragraphs! more and more better is coming out of you

WOW. This piece is amazing. It all ties together in a very lovely way.

Section i is my favorite, because it brings up something people don't generally talk about, you know? Usually, people feel that they have to be firm when they talk about not having sex, but everyone has that little wish in the back of their head that's begging them to give in. I hope that made sense, hehe.

Very good job on this; keep writing!

k.X