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zuelinka 2009-02-12 . chapter 4
When are posting a new chapter? I love the principal, he is so weird and cool.
Sameisauce 2008-01-15 . chapter 4
I'm totally in love with this story,write more as soon as you can.
Nyxelestia 2008-01-15 . chapter 4
Aw, crap...my mom's name is Mina. She muster never know of this...

:D

Good chapter! Liked the vamps being super gorgeous and all. :D

What's Vamprocillin – F?
Vampire23 2007-12-22 . chapter 3
Awesome story I love it! I hope you update soon.
Nyxelestia 2007-12-21 . chapter 3
I have never read or seen Dracula. Sorry.

Loved the principle. :D Anyway, awesome new update (though you better update ASAP :D). Please keep up the great work - I can't wait for more!
notw 2007-11-15 . chapter 2
AWESOME! i have been waiting for a story like this,
I can't wait for the update
Nyxelestia 2007-10-27 . chapter 2
Hi! Nice update. :D I do hope to see an update soon.

Anyway, here's the thing: be a little careful, because you want to foreshadow without making something too obvious, and Stan's sleepwalking - you could have mention like half a sentence out of dialogue to say it gets people into trouble, which would foreshadow without making it too obvious, but you kinda overdid it with two or three sentences. Fine line which you have to be careful about.

Now, I am liking this (geez, even girls don't take 45 minutes showers) so I really do hope to see more ASAP! :D
Nyxelestia 2007-10-21 . chapter 1
I think it would be nice to have him in that role. :D

Anyway, while I'm still here:

Yeah, chapter did move a little too fast, but it was all right. This sounds rather interesting. It's making me anxious to post my own fantasy story on here. :D

I'm going to guess the normal students are vampires...so I'm going to wonder where the transfers come in. :D

Please keep up the good work and update ASAP!
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