Original poem. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

Wow. That's pretty powerful and I'm not really one for this kind of thing so that is saying a lot!

'and they say...that we're living in amovie world...so they say...but does the hero get the girl...in...the...end...?'

this peice makes me think of 'love you to death' by kill hannah. so by law, i love it. ]