Koji can be annoying eh?

And hey, Suzuka's going to Arcadia - Koji's world. At least she can find out for herself that what he's talking about is true - and that he's not some kind of ghost.

Not much to review though (since the story is just starting)

Hope you write more ^_^

~hiro

Hey there ^_^

Suzuka finally got the chance to talk to Koji a.k.a. "The Ghost".

"I’m not a ghost! But you wouldn’t understand that, so just pretend that I’m a ghost" --> hehe... lol

I spotted one error though - - "She was snoring aloud, which made Koji laughed." - - change to 'laugh'.

Sembreak? Are you from the Philippines? My younger bros having his "sembreak" back in Manila too. ^_^

hello, I saw you in ShoujoStar so I thought to drop by and give you a welcome review of some sort (lol).

For a first chapter, this sounds fine. It wasn't boring and the story line was set right on. An all-girls school in the middle of the forest may sound really eerie. Maybe that's the reason why rumors of ghosts swept the school.

Suzuka saw a demi-human? Could it be that she has some supernatural powers? Or maybe she's a demi-human herself too. Well, those things are allocated for the next chapters.

Although I suggest that you put some descriptions on how the characters look like. You really haven't described Suzuka except for her disheveled hair and pale skin.


Take care,
~hiro