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| ilovevampires2 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I like it. I love the concept of having to turn evil to save good. Well done |
| The Postscript 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting question, one which I am not sure how to answer myself. The repetition of "Hear me out . . ." and "No longer . . ." really add strength and coherency to the poem. Nice write. Keep it up, k. |