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Reviews For: The Somerton Man

Queensofthefreakinworld
2008-04-20
ch 23,
abuseOhh... this story is very interesting... what I dont understand is why don't you have lot more reviews
Twilight Starr
2007-12-10
ch 3,
abuseI feel so sorry for Isabella. Gwen doesn't seem like much of a friend. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr
2007-12-10
ch 2,
abuseGood addition. It doesn't sound like Gwen is very suited for Daniel if she doesn't want kids. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat start. Nice chapter title. Good work.

~Twilight Starr~
vio923
2007-12-05
ch 23,
abuseI just found this story. At first I felt sorry for Daniel. He was obsessed with Gwen and she used him. After Isabella died I thought that he would 'get better' -- instead he became awful.

When he married Eleanor and Martha was 'playing her games' he should have fired her. Regardless of his feelings or lack of for Eleanor, she is his wife and at least deserves respect from the servants.

He also should have told Eleanor that Clara was coming to live with them. I know he feels guilty for Isabella's death and that is why he is uncomfortable around Clara. But she is his daughter after all.

He's had many years to come to terms with what happened. He needs to let go of the past and move on. Eleanor, given the chance can help him heal.

You said that Gwen would appear again. I hope that he doesn't give in to her again.
ANGEL992210
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseI love your story.
virgo-valentina
2007-11-22
ch 23,
abuseI've really enjoyed reading this story so far. Looking forward to reading more...

p.s. daniel is kind of a self-ansorbed bastard isn't he?
p.p.s. I really pity poor eleanor
Creative Colors
2007-11-08
ch 18,
abuseI really do like this story a lot. Got to admit, I wait for a while to review it because you update it so often. Not that I mind, it's great to see you're going to finish it. Isabella is dead?! That's not fair, of course life isn't fair but still. Martha is being well Martha.
supercaligirl
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abusethis is really good.
Amaia-Lori
2007-10-23
ch 5,
abuseI would love to read a bit of back story, though perhaps you have more flashbacks planned for the future (if that makes any sense...). Once again, I'm enjoying the storyline. Let me know if you're ever in need of an editor.
Creative Colors
2007-10-23
ch 4,
abuseWow, this is a really great story and no reviews yet? I admit, I didn't know what to think with the idea of an affair and such but I rather like this story so far. I like how you're having the reader go through Daniel's emotions and point of views. I don't know what the Georgina Novels are but love Wuthering Heights though, can see bits of and pieces in this story but it's so yours though. I'm looking forward for more.
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