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| Lady Rainwind 2007-12-03 ch 1,  | abuseI was up making a tune for this last night so that I could sing it to myself. I think it might just become my theme song, thank you. |
| applecoffee 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHi Jeannie-Redd.. Thanks for the review! :)x It really hit me hard... I miss someone so badly...!!(;__;) That sometimes i`d cry myself to sleep... i could relate to this very much...! nicely done! love it.. i love how u express it.. loving the lyrics too.. have you made a tune to this already? :)x * (These days grow cold and lonely)..yeah my days have been growing cold and lonely lately and i`m trying to fight it... (wipe these tears that fall down my face)... i wish he`d do that... |
| AnnonymousReviewer 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw i really liked this song! lots of emotion, lots of feeling. great job! |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Flow's nice. ^^ Just watch out for misplaced comas and such. {I'm a grammar nerd when I want to be.} Either take them out from the end of the lines all together or add in some periods. Other than that: Superb. Two thumbs up. |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abusenice job :] i like this alot...i can totally relate :] |