 TearsFromWillowStreet 2008-09-25 . chapter 1Awesome! Just amazing. |
 Lady Rainwind 2007-12-03 . chapter 1I was up making a tune for this last night so that I could sing it to myself. I think it might just become my theme song, thank you. |
 applecoffee 2007-11-07 . chapter 1Hi Jeannie-Redd..
Thanks for the review! :)x
It really hit me hard...
I miss someone so badly...!!(;__;)
That sometimes i`d cry myself to sleep...
i could relate to this very much...!
nicely done! love it..
i love how u express it..
loving the lyrics too..
have you made a tune to this already? :)x
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(These days grow cold and lonely)..yeah my days have been growing cold and lonely lately and i`m trying to fight it...
(wipe these tears that fall down my face)... i wish he`d do that... |
 AnnonymousReviewer 2007-10-25 . chapter 1 aw i really liked this song! lots of emotion, lots of feeling. great job! |
 Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-10-23 . chapter 1I like it. Flow's nice. ^^
Just watch out for misplaced comas and such. {I'm a grammar nerd when I want to be.}
Either take them out from the end of the lines all together or add in some periods.
Other than that: Superb. Two thumbs up. |
 upsidedown.underwater 2007-10-22 . chapter 1nice job :] i like this alot...i can totally relate :] |