love this

Umm, I don't know what to say.
I just read it and funnily enough i was only watching and listening for the flow and the rhymes and to be frank I didn't even skim what the poem was about. at all. I'd have to really focus on the words to get the message and that's fine, im just lazy. Sorry.

Anyway, no offense and im sorry if it does offend you but i was surprised by how good this is when your profile thingy says you're 13. Im not going to lie, i expected much less than this. Good for you though, it's pretty good.

I absolutely loved this poem, honey. It rocks and I totally agree with the message. Of course, with your BRILLIANT diction, it took me two reads to understand fully said message. Like, it was kinda obvious in the title, but ya know... Sometimes people are a bit... Eh. I love this. Your poetry absolutely rocks. This is a great poem and I suggest you keep writing and I'll keep reading. Not usually a fan of poetry, but yours gets me. It's amazing. Okey? Much love. Cassandra.

nicee job i liked the rhyme scheme :)