I like this a lot.. the part about not being able to read their eyes is wonderful... I also like how you say since that night.. letting the reader wonder what happened that night... awesome job

Nice work. The pleading is sweet and shows caring.

~Twilight Starr~

This is really good it like the content and the flow.

oh...ive been here too. sorta. some things are different, but the basics are the same. great job!