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| simpleplan13 2007-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseI like this a lot.. the part about not being able to read their eyes is wonderful... I also like how you say since that night.. letting the reader wonder what happened that night... awesome job |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseNice work. The pleading is sweet and shows caring. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| reckless fire 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good it like the content and the flow. |
| sweets555 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseoh...ive been here too. sorta. some things are different, but the basics are the same. great job! |