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Reviews For: Don't Believe

Momiji K. Sohma
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuse"'1'Never ganna give you up, '2'never ganna let you down, '3'never ganna run around and desert you, '4'never ganna make you cry, '5'never ganna say goodbye, '6'never ganna tell a lie, and hurt you." -Rick astley.

He broke all the rules.
simpleplan13
2007-12-20
ch 1,
abuseI love the ending.. its so angry and rightfully so... great piece.. I can definitely relate to this... I really love the line about his concious just kicking in... nice job
i.am.pockets
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abusedefinately adding to my favorites! (i LOVE ryhming poems. i don't know why.) i know exactly how you feel too... sucks...
Twilight Starr
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseThat's so sad. I've felt like that, too. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Yusuf
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseI can't say I've been there, but I can assume the feelings through your words.
Nicely done.
sweets555
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuseoh, ive been there.
its not pretty.
hope youre better.
addin to favs
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