"'1'Never ganna give you up, '2'never ganna let you down, '3'never ganna run around and desert you, '4'never ganna make you cry, '5'never ganna say goodbye, '6'never ganna tell a lie, and hurt you." -Rick astley.

He broke all the rules.

I love the ending.. its so angry and rightfully so... great piece.. I can definitely relate to this... I really love the line about his concious just kicking in... nice job

definately adding to my favorites! (i LOVE ryhming poems. i don't know why.) i know exactly how you feel too... sucks...

That's so sad. I've felt like that, too. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I can't say I've been there, but I can assume the feelings through your words.
Nicely done.

oh, ive been there.
its not pretty.
hope youre better.
addin to favs