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| Momiji K. Sohma 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuse"'1'Never ganna give you up, '2'never ganna let you down, '3'never ganna run around and desert you, '4'never ganna make you cry, '5'never ganna say goodbye, '6'never ganna tell a lie, and hurt you." -Rick astley. He broke all the rules. |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the ending.. its so angry and rightfully so... great piece.. I can definitely relate to this... I really love the line about his concious just kicking in... nice job |
| i.am.pockets 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abusedefinately adding to my favorites! (i LOVE ryhming poems. i don't know why.) i know exactly how you feel too... sucks... |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad. I've felt like that, too. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Yusuf 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseI can't say I've been there, but I can assume the feelings through your words. Nicely done. |
| sweets555 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseoh, ive been there. its not pretty. hope youre better. addin to favs |