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| simpleplan13 2007-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseYour ready, you just scared.. you're ready, you're just.. I like this... its sweet and uplifting.. I really like the line "let's be scared together" |
| i.am.pockets 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseamazing! really good job describing everything. (favorite line: you holding my hand is all i need to be strong, to fight back, and the sense I belong...) |
| Keilee 2007-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey girl this poem is so good it fits into ur life style...keep up on the writing ur poems are the best.. |
| ten pts above average 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseWow.. I could really relate to this.. especially the beginning.. "You're telling me your not ready. Your ready, your just scared" I really liked this guy and thats pretty much exactly what he said to me.. But unlike your happy ending.. I got screwed over.. Haha.. good poem! |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseCute. :D ~Twilight Starr~ |
| kloun mannequin 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI think, all your poems are sweet, this one is nice and hopeful. |
| reckless fire 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is really nicely written, I had a idea for something like this but you hit my thought in the head good job |
| sweets555 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abusecute!! |