 simpleplan13 2007-12-16 . chapter 1Your ready, you just scared.. you're ready, you're just..
I like this... its sweet and uplifting.. I really like the line "let's be scared together" |
 i.am.pockets 2007-11-28 . chapter 1amazing! really good job describing everything. (favorite line: you holding my hand is all i need to be strong, to fight back, and the sense I belong...) |
 Keilee 2007-11-07 . chapter 1 Hey girl this poem is so good it fits into ur life style...keep up on the writing ur poems are the best.. |
 ten pts above average 2007-11-05 . chapter 1Wow.. I could really relate to this.. especially the beginning.. "You're telling me your not ready. Your ready, your just scared" I really liked this guy and thats pretty much exactly what he said to me.. But unlike your happy ending.. I got screwed over.. Haha.. good poem! |
 Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 . chapter 1Cute. :D
~Twilight Starr~ |
 kloun mannequin 2007-10-25 . chapter 1I think, all your poems are sweet, this one is nice and hopeful. |
 reckless fire 2007-10-23 . chapter 1This is really nicely written, I had a idea for something like this but you hit my thought in the head good job |
 sweets555 2007-10-22 . chapter 1cute!! |