Very good, with a lot of emotion. Just as I always say, We can fool the mind with the tounge but we can never fool the heart... Another amazing and heartfelt piece my dear!

mothers do have there own songs. nice work

Oh gosh, the last bit is simply amazing and a perfect end. The style is very nice and I like it a lot.

Deanna

sad :(

angry :(

good poem.

love the imagery deary.