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| vaudeville summers 2007-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseAw, 'tis adorably pained. (If such a thing exists) My heart goes out to the narrator for the heartache they suffer through. I like the short lines...it's a bit like pointilism. ~Deanna |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked the idea. ^^ Very nice. Pretty choppy though, you should fix that, but other than that: It was enjoyable. |