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| D's Silly G 2008-05-30 ch 11,  | abuseaww those poor boys. this is a really good story, can't wait to read the next part! |
| boyzarecrazy24 2008-03-28 ch 11, | abuse='[ omg. u have to finish this! OMG! plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzlpzplzplz icant live not knowing that everythings alright! =[ everything has to be alright... AH update =] before i go insane!...if it hasnt happened already! lol 10/10 xoxoxo |
| silent. 2008-03-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseplease please please update this story? cant wait to know what happens |
| JtheChosen1 2008-01-27 ch 11, | abuseman what a gr8 story! i hope u update it soon, i luv the pairing! |
| RebelVampire 2008-01-25 ch 11, | abuseYOU HAVE TO UPDATE...I just started this story and I'm hooked |
| Story Critic 2008-01-17 ch 11, | abusethey should talk it out and get married have babys and stuff (joking about the baby thing) |
| iNSANEmoments 2008-01-14 ch 11, | abuseThis chapter was depressing. I cannot wait for the ending. I don't think I have anymore to say, either. = ] Except, of course, that the chocolate part right at the very end was adorable. Update soon! |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-12 ch 11, | abuseAw |
| iNSANEmoments 2008-01-10 ch 10, | abuseHi. I just started reading this story a couple of days ago. = ] But, anyway - I adore the plot. Really, I do. This whole Boss/Employee thing is fantastic. Except, I understand why Lexis did what he did. I mean, he cared about Azure. And with Azure giving him the cold shoulder, he had to pretend to be 'Alex'. = O They are utterly adorable together, though. I hope Azure can look past the lie, and realize Lexis truly loves him. Awesome job. |
| Sweet Child 2008-01-07 ch 10, | abuseNow I feel bad for Lexis and Az. They were a really nice pair, and it's always sad to see a couple so deeply in love fall apart. But I guess you'll make it better *smiles knowingly* Also, I'm sorry about the "Gawd" thing. I didn't mean to sound rude or intrusive. I was plainly surprised of seeing it used in this context. Last, but not least, I love the chapter titles. They tell a story of their own, to put it like that. So, keep it up, and I hope that this isn't the end of the story yet (I hate it when they end. It makes me feel kind of sad, because I won't get to read on). |
| xanthofile 2008-01-06 ch 10, | abuseSEE, TUH ANGST IS BETTER SERVED IN PIECEMEAL! heh. which is my way of saying, "i love you for taking my opinion to heart!" i expecially liked the scene of lexis being pretty catatonic in all his unwashed/unshaven redhead self. :laughs: |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-06 ch 10, | abuseI'm glad Az got his sight back and hopefully they will be able to work things out. |
| Jess 2008-01-06 ch 10, anon. | abusedamn that sucks, I hope it get's better too! |
| Sweet Child 2007-12-31 ch 9, | abuseInteresting story. I especially like the moments between Lexis and Azure. They're so in love with each other! It's unbearably cute. The only thing I don't think fits in so good is when yo keep using the word "Gawd". The reason for that is that I usually only hear that from teenage girls. So, it feels kind of strange in this context... I hope you'll update soon, and I'll certainly be there to read it. |
| portabellaprincess 2007-12-30 ch 9, | abuseAww poor Azure, I wonder if he is getting his sight back? |