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Ivy Clutches 2008-10-15 . chapter 11
Oh my god. Lexis holding Azure's sweater and crying is probably the most heart-wrenching thing I've ever read. You have to update. Please? This story is amazing, I was late to class today because I just had to read to the end. So please, please, please update!
D's Silly G 2008-05-30 . chapter 11
aww those poor boys. this is a really good story, can't wait to read the next part!
boyzarecrazy24 2008-03-28 . chapter 11
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omg. u have to finish this!
OMG! plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzlpzplzplz
icant live not knowing that everythings alright!
=[ everything has to be alright...

AH update =] before i go insane!...if it hasnt happened already!
lol
10/10
xoxoxo
silent. 2008-03-27 . chapter 11
please please please update this story? cant wait to know what happens
JtheChosen1 2008-01-27 . chapter 11
man what a gr8 story! i hope u update it soon, i luv the pairing!
RebelVampire 2008-01-25 . chapter 11
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE...I just started this story and I'm hooked
Story Critic 2008-01-17 . chapter 11
they should talk it out and get married have babys and stuff
(joking about the baby thing)
iNSANEmoments 2008-01-14 . chapter 11
This chapter was depressing.
I cannot wait for the ending.
I don't think I have anymore to say, either. = ]

Except, of course, that the chocolate part right at the very end was adorable.

Update soon!
portabellaprincess 2008-01-12 . chapter 11
Aw
iNSANEmoments 2008-01-10 . chapter 10
Hi. I just started reading this story a couple of days ago. = ]
But, anyway - I adore the plot. Really, I do. This whole Boss/Employee thing is fantastic.
Except, I understand why Lexis did what he did. I mean, he cared about Azure. And with Azure giving him the cold shoulder, he had to pretend to be 'Alex'. = O
They are utterly adorable together, though. I hope Azure can look past the lie, and realize Lexis truly loves him.

Awesome job.
Sweet Child 2008-01-07 . chapter 10
Now I feel bad for Lexis and Az. They were a really nice pair, and it's always sad to see a couple so deeply in love fall apart. But I guess you'll make it better *smiles knowingly*

Also, I'm sorry about the "Gawd" thing. I didn't mean to sound rude or intrusive. I was plainly surprised of seeing it used in this context.

Last, but not least, I love the chapter titles. They tell a story of their own, to put it like that. So, keep it up, and I hope that this isn't the end of the story yet (I hate it when they end. It makes me feel kind of sad, because I won't get to read on).
xanthofile 2008-01-06 . chapter 10
SEE, TUH ANGST IS BETTER SERVED IN PIECEMEAL! heh. which is my way of saying, "i love you for taking my opinion to heart!" i expecially liked the scene of lexis being pretty catatonic in all his unwashed/unshaven redhead self. :laughs:
portabellaprincess 2008-01-06 . chapter 10
I'm glad Az got his sight back and hopefully they will be able to work things out.
Jess 2008-01-06 . chapter 10
damn that sucks, I hope it get's better too!
Sweet Child 2007-12-31 . chapter 9
Interesting story. I especially like the moments between Lexis and Azure. They're so in love with each other! It's unbearably cute.

The only thing I don't think fits in so good is when yo keep using the word "Gawd". The reason for that is that I usually only hear that from teenage girls. So, it feels kind of strange in this context...

I hope you'll update soon, and I'll certainly be there to read it.
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