This is really funny and really sad at the same time. It's cool, I love it!

I really like it great job. I like the phrasing and how you compared things. great job.
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Dude, this was awesome! Wow though, you're still updating your account, lol. I totally haven't been on mine since like 2005 or something. :P But anyway, I loved your poem! Great job! :)

you're a great writer. Loved this. kepp it up!

Whoa, that made me laugh.
The flow was nice; loved the idea of it all.
Superb.

Is this about trying to write a limerick? Or is it about a limerick not being the light-hearted nonsense it seems? I'm not sure, but it was good either way. *faves*