|Reviews for Pursuing Happines|
| the Stranger in the moonlight 10/25/07 . chapter 1
This was breathtakinlg entrancing and well spun. It gives an almost sneer to the said man who is all alone...
"head them my quest is forlorn" the head should be "heed".
the Stranger in the moonlight
| the face in the window 10/23/07 . chapter 1
Fiction? Wow, this is amazing. You should write more of this style. Did this really happy?
| half-sketched.staccatos 10/22/07 . chapter 1
I definitely think you should continue and turn this into a story. My favorite part was the style: present tense is often difficult to write well - not to mention many people forget and keep switching tenses. You writing here is excellent! I can't wait to hear more from this story. :)
| Core Satiated 10/22/07 . chapter 1
Loved the concept, enjoyed the story and my favorite thing about this was the way that happiness is presented in perception. The depth is phenomenal. You never disappoint.
| Elle dont tu lis les histoires 10/22/07 . chapter 1
very philosophical and sophisticated. i particularly like the style in which it's written.
one thing i don't like though, is that it's a little cliche.
otherwise, very good job, i really like it.
| Alice Sleeps 10/22/07 . chapter 1
I love the imagery and the seemingly mundane topic that you've brought life to.