Perhaps, if this were longer it would make a good monologe. But still it almost has the flow of poetry, I REALLY like this one.
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

Very well done! I really like it, you know I actually thought I might've heard the Ebb and Flow of the tide in my head, but I might just be crazy. I like how you used the Ocean to explain how small we are, and very well written, again!
~Danielle=)

this is really great, really philosophical... i find that whenever i go to the ocean (which isn't often, i don't actually like it that much) it always gets me thinking about life. but this is much more sophisticated than i will ever get.