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| R. Louise 2007-12-14 ch 1,  | abuseThe first few lines got me into a hopeful mood. And the last few tore it down. A great way to write a poem about this subject. |
| poemkitten7 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, your stuff is really good. This is a beautifully written poem. I love the raw emotions shown. Keep it up. :) -Sara |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| doxology 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. this just may be my favorite on this site so far. just wow. I can totally relate. great, great, wonderful, awesome, superb, nulcear job! peace and love ~> h.p. warble |
| sweden 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abusewow. amazing. i know this and i'm adding this to my fav. you turned it into a lovely poem, with such beauty and imagery. hopefully it didn't happen to you, eh? |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseBRAVO! I loved it. Reminded me of the situation i'm going through now! Adding to favs! I love it, Great work! Kristie Marie |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseCute poem. I liked it. Take away the periods between apart though. They are a tad annoying. Pretty good otherwise. ^^ |