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| silver-eyed-elf 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseIt felt very CSI in the beginning, but when I realized that you were talking about a vase I was pleasantly suprised. |
| painted.music 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa I like how this was so overdramatic. *grin* And I think it worked well as a second-person poem. I felt as if I were living it, as if I had blood on my hands from the murder (until, of course, I found out I had just "murdered" the vase). The tension built for me, and you literally had my heart pounding. :) Zaijen -Shan- |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! The whole thing seems to be leading up to murder and the whole time I was thinking "the parents will only be mad?" Very nice indeed. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| theThinker 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseGood poem... alittle heavy for a broken vase... it almost doesnt seem to mesh with the rest of the poem! Its funny though i LIKE it! |