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Reviews For: Bloodied Hands and Distorted Alibis

silver-eyed-elf
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseIt felt very CSI in the beginning, but when I realized that you were talking about a vase I was pleasantly suprised.
painted.music
2007-10-26
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

I like how this was so overdramatic. *grin* And I think it worked well as a second-person poem. I felt as if I were living it, as if I had blood on my hands from the murder (until, of course, I found out I had just "murdered" the vase). The tension built for me, and you literally had my heart pounding. :)

Zaijen
-Shan-
the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! The whole thing seems to be leading up to murder and the whole time I was thinking "the parents will only be mad?" Very nice indeed.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
theThinker
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseGood poem... alittle heavy for a broken vase... it almost doesnt seem to mesh with the rest of the poem! Its funny though i LIKE it!
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