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| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-06-09 ch 6,  | abusehahahaha loved it! update soon. |
| gulistanlik 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseAre you serious? My that has got to be awkward, between Isaac and Jenna! I wonder why they broke up? Oh thankies for the 'hint'! Well well, Dean is full of surprises. I'm just so glad we don't have a stereotypical jock here. Goody! Keep up the good work! gulistanlik |
| chocolatechipash 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseyipe!! so glad u updated it made my day. anyway what happened to the boxers or briefs question?? aww im loving dean *squeals. |
| Kitsune and Her Ritsune 2008-05-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseHaha! thank you! |
| chocolatechipash 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abusegreat chapter, but abit of a dissapointment im dying for the interview but i am IN LOVE with dean that sexy man. update soon. |
| loveSZbrownie 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abusewell i like how this version is going. I think it's much mroe interesting and less dramatic as the other ones. About the day care centre thing. YOu're in america right? its probably different than australia, but in aus we have about 4 carers for about 40-50 kids..dunno if its different in USA. Anyway, goodluck with future chapters. |
| giRLAddiCted 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abusemeanie...you didn't tell me you were going to update! Nonetheless, good update. FINISH YOUR DAMN STORIES WOMAN! :p |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-29 ch 5, | abuseI'm leaning towards 'hated each others guts' for Isaac and Jenna but I could be wrong. I guess this, though, because if they had been in a relationship, she'd talk about that sort of awkward. But she hasn't, in my opinion anyway. So, Dean forgot about the interview? Oh dear. Is he going to forget again? And, I couldn't stop laughing at the beginning of this chapter. Poor poor Jenna, haha! Ooh you're going to Netherlands? You must be plenty excited! Keep up the good work, by the way. I think there were a couple grammatical and/or spelling mistakes but since I can't remember them, obviously they weren't big. Nothing proofreading can't fix. ^_^ Till the next chappie, gulistanlik |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-28 ch 5, | abuseYou're moving to the Netherlands? Thats pretty cool- I like the story- can you try and update soon? :D |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseReally good, as per always. [: |
| Kitsune and Her Ritsune 2008-05-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseI must say...I am reviewing this solely for selfish reasons =] I like seeing my name on your list :D Lol. Anyways, super bomb chapter...but probably like many others, I am anxious for the drama to begin! |
| kalicokitty15 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abusetoo many characters and story plots.. got a bit bored.. |
| chocolatechipash 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abusenice work wow that sounds intresting lol cant wait to find out more about cecilia and the interview ahaha. update soon |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseHeyya! Hehe, it's spelled 'physical' not 'psycal' and it's 'physics' not 'psychics' unless if you're talking about a class to do with fortunetelling and stuff like that. =D Anyhow, I didn't quite understand, what was the deal with Isaac and Jenna two years ago? What happened? Were they in a relationship or hated each others guts...or something? Wow, Dean is actually a nice guy. This sounds much more realistic because it's not true that every superhunk in every school is a stuckup bastard. They can be really nice, just like normal people. I'm glad you've stuck that in here. ^_^ Keep up the good work! gulistanlik |
| starzdestiny 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseinteresting story, do update soon. |