Reviews for Love's Bitter Price

Forward in Time
2007-10-23
ch 1,

abuseWow, I love this story. Really nice job.
Probbably the best story I have read on this site yet.

Good Job and Good luck!

IdeasInTheAir
2007-10-23
ch 1,

abuseIt's good, I like it. The only thing is, is that the Bitter Price is washed away so quickly, it never was, yet when they leave again, it comes back twice as hard. So maybe the title isn't quite fitting, but I have a problem with titles, so you can ignore that part and I wont mind. =)
It's a nice oneshot, very simple, and frankly, short and sweet. Perfect. =) I very much liked it, keep writing!
~Danielle=)

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