Wow, creative, :D I don't have much to say though, but good job. Everything seems really good.

Pretty. I think when writing song lyrics that don't have music to go with them, you should concentrate on 2 thing: literal and symbolic. A good poem or song has both. Also, the theme of this song takes too long to emerge. Try to speed it up and beef it up little.

Feather La

Cool. It had a nice rhythm that made it kinda fun to read. :)

And to get rid of the spaces...argh... It's hard to explain. If you wanted it like...

A trumpet call,

Rounds the chores up after noon.

(To get rid of the spaces between these, get onto the end of the first line and then hold in shift while you press enter. I hope that helped and wasn't too confusing of me... D: )

xo!