Hey!
I love this story-it made me laugh pretty hard and out loud... xD
Keep writing,love your style!
-The Dramatic Llama

The person doing the spells has a lot of patience, I wouldn't have even done the first one. Also, sadly enough, I didn't notice the chessburger sp until it was mentioned. Sigh.

This was really interesting! I didn't get the witch buring thing but loved this none the less! Unsolved mysteries (sorta) are always fun to read. Even if we haven't really got much to work on on the characters I still liked them. The ending was grizzly but holds the story together.

Ah and you wrote 'frink-driver' but no worries! This was awesome! I liked the flow if it all and how it was all done through letter interactions.

um okay then...that was really random. do any of those spells actually work?

Dude, that was freaking awesome. Wow. So I'm assuming that the person wanted the wedding to be wrecked, so he got that guy or whoever to do the spells? Hm... A mystery.

I think you could really kind of expand on this - if you want, you could flesh it out and add dialogue and characterization and even add an epilogue to make it a novelita (a little novel! ^^) That would be exciting, too.

It's kinda like a cross between Death Note and the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya.

Why didn't the guy want them to get married?

~indigo