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| JennieMR 2007-11-20 ch 4,  | abuseYou know what? There really are very few romance writers who can hold my attention so well without adding suspense and mystery into the equation. Your writing totally draws me in. Poor Grace. She really needs to let go of George. Update soon! |
| heartfeltlove 2007-11-19 ch 4, | abuseI feel so bad for her. keep up the good work |
| heartfeltlove 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseShe is so much like me.Especiall with the dreams and the jeans. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-11-16 ch 3, | abuseMake her dump George, and FAST! Please?? 0.0 |
| JennieMR 2007-11-15 ch 3, | abuseOh no. I hope she confides in him. Just tells him flat out that George barely knows she exits, and that she doesn't care to continue seeing him. James is a mysterious character so far. And i like him. :D |
| JennieMR 2007-11-15 ch 2, | abuseAWw... I feel bad for Grace. George definitely seems strange, teh way he ignores her. Maybe he's gay or seeing someone else but doesn't want to tell her? On to the next chap... |
| AC is AWESOME 2007-11-15 ch 3, | abuseDear Grace, Dump George's **. In my head, Jame's is so much cuter. Love, AC. I enjoy this a lot. The only thing I could request is that you need to think more about a passage of time. Grace's thoughts can be convientantly placed between scenes. I can't wait to see Grace deal with this. I see her as often being a truthful person, but she is really longing for intimacy. For drama's sake, I hope she says 'no', but you have created charactor I really want to do the right thing for her own poor sake. - AC |
| The Killer Is Me 2007-11-15 ch 3, | abuseThis is great. I'll be reading the next chapter for sure =D |
| JennieMR 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOh! You're an awesome writer, and this first chapter drew me right in. This is a first chapter, and not a one shot, right? I'd love to read more! I can identify with her so, so well. "My imagination is my solace in times of uncertainty and unhappiness. Knowing that when things are too much, you can sink away into somewhere where everything goes as I want it to." - Exactly why I write so much. writing has pulled me through some difficult times. "They’re talking, and I’m trying to be cheerful and to contribute. I’m trying to be someone they want to be with, and failing, and slowly get cut out of conversation." I can't tell you how often I've been there. Ugh. lol Please, please continue. |
| Trishcbury 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abusewow. i can relate. haha. |
| santiforthevenom. 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written, well conveyed wistful tone. i actually have a oneshot similar to the content of this. If you'd like, you can check it out on my page, it's called "exist?". |