Very true...

I'd like to see you write a poem without the rhymes. The scheme is a little inconsistent. Also, not being beholden to rhymes will allow you to further express your sentiments. Maybe consider replacing the rhyming pattern with a standard meter, to give it a musical quality. Just so you know, I think "an" is meant to be "and"?

Good job. Write on!

I applaud you both. Beautiful work.

Excellent poem! Keep up the awesome work, Ninja. God Bless you.

beautiful
nicely written
keep up the great work

God bless,
FIREBRAVE

good message, scripturally accurate.
well done.