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SEMMU
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI'd like to see you write a poem without the rhymes. The scheme is a little inconsistent. Also, not being beholden to rhymes will allow you to further express your sentiments. Maybe consider replacing the rhyming pattern with a standard meter, to give it a musical quality. Just so you know, I think "an" is meant to be "and"?

Good job. Write on!
you_no_me
2007-11-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI applaud you both. Beautiful work.
Needa S
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseExcellent poem! Keep up the awesome work, Ninja. God Bless you.
FIREBRAVE
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abusebeautiful
nicely written
keep up the great work

God bless,
FIREBRAVE
review
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abusegood message, scripturally accurate.
well done.
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