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| SEMMU 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseI'd like to see you write a poem without the rhymes. The scheme is a little inconsistent. Also, not being beholden to rhymes will allow you to further express your sentiments. Maybe consider replacing the rhyming pattern with a standard meter, to give it a musical quality. Just so you know, I think "an" is meant to be "and"? Good job. Write on! |
| you_no_me 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI applaud you both. Beautiful work. |
| Needa S 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem! Keep up the awesome work, Ninja. God Bless you. |
| FIREBRAVE 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abusebeautiful nicely written keep up the great work God bless, FIREBRAVE |
| review 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abusegood message, scripturally accurate. well done. |