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Reviews For: Wonders of God
RodeoGirl 2008-07-28 . chapter 1
Very true...
SEMMU 2008-01-26 . chapter 1
I'd like to see you write a poem without the rhymes. The scheme is a little inconsistent. Also, not being beholden to rhymes will allow you to further express your sentiments. Maybe consider replacing the rhyming pattern with a standard meter, to give it a musical quality. Just so you know, I think "an" is meant to be "and"?

Good job. Write on!
you_no_me 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
I applaud you both. Beautiful work.
Needa S 2007-10-25 . chapter 1
Excellent poem! Keep up the awesome work, Ninja. God Bless you.
FIREBRAVE 2007-10-23 . chapter 1
beautiful
nicely written
keep up the great work

God bless,
FIREBRAVE
review 2007-10-23 . chapter 1
good message, scripturally accurate.
well done.
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