Hi, this is very very very good. That's all I can say. Actually I do have something else to say...keep it up.

Hello. :D

So. I seriously love the idea of a sunflower & her sun. It's bittersweet to me.

Personally, I'm not very fond of the word 'onyx' here. I know it can mean the color black, but the word makes me think of the actual stone. And the sky seems too intangible to be anything hard or concrete. But I realize that this is taste.

But besides that tidbit, I really liked this.

-max

That was sweet, at least, the dance went well for her.

~SirScott

That was a good start. It would be kinda scary to meet someone offline. It's like you know them, but you don't.
Keep writing. I'm interested in how things work out.

~SirScott

I love your description you have the most interesting style to read because they are so quirky but in a way that sticks in your head and you just weave the image out of nothing. Brilliant story please continue it.

w0w! that was a great story!