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| z00mbini1090 2007-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow. This story is so weird. It's awesome. It reminds me of one of those weird movies narrated by a British guy who enjoys going off tangent. Seriously, this made me laugh so hard. Please continue it. However, while I enjoy this style of writing, watch how you phrase certain sentences. It may sound good at first, but after you re-read it, some parts are excessively complex. ~Zoombini1090~ P.S. I just read "The Portrait of Dorian Gray" and loved it. :)) Read it if you haven't; in my opinion, it's one of Wilde's best books. |