It's unique and unnerving. Wonderful imagery.

Oh thats really really cool. I loved the last line, "Things will be better you realise, in the land of the mad" it gave me shivers.

Rowan...Rowan...Rowan... how many times must I say! that i absolutly L♥VE this!! you rock! Keep up the AmAzInG work!

Oh, I lovelovelove this! Especially the second stanza, very good!

Love,
~Dia

Oo- I like this one too. This is rather amazing. I love your imagery, your unique descriptions. I think that adds to your work. Kudos. = )

i like the tone of this,
but without the boldened words, i don't know if i would have kept reading it. so haha nice job there you manipulator (in a great way.)
i like the first and third stanzas best. they have a clear feel.

I'm not sure whether I agree with all of this, haha. But I really like it. Especially the last stanza. I realy like the "(&still)" part. Great job darling!

You're probably like, what a freak, she said "darling". But whenever I say/write it, it reminds me of 1920s lady movie stars in red dresses with cigarettes hanging from their lips. Great, huh? Haha. Anyway...good job!

I like this! Oh my how i love it! This is a perfect definition of why a love your writing. Its states matters that no one is willing to confront, and, it has a hidden message! I love those! Keep it up!

wow. i love this. a lot. you don't even know. people wonder why i sometimes use the ampersand, but i just really like how it looks.

I love it, it's really cool. Your formatting is great, (as always) and I love your word choice. Rowan, honestly, you're a REALLY good poet. I love the first stanza (what a cool word!) and I think you did a really good job describing it. It's amazing. =) Keep 'em coming!
(See, this time I have you on author alerts! I didn't last time; but I was lazy back then.o_O)
~Danielle=)

I've thought that before, that maybe reality is to blame and things would be better if one didn't live in it...
I like the formatting on this, how the first two or three words of each stanza are done. It adds power to the rest of it, which is amazing of course. Really intense.