hi are you ever going to update. its great story

Please continue for the love of God continue the story. I have to read more, no I NEED to read more or I might die a horrible, excruciating, even tragic death. I beg you, this story has me so envested and here are only five chapters. I'm usually not an impatient person, but I'm desperate for this story and the only way to be pacified is a reassurance that this story will be continued.
** chow**

Please continue this version of the story! I remember you started to rewrite it or something, but this is really, really good stuff and you have a lot of people supporting you to continue.

interesting, please continue this.

Hi,pleaaase carry this on! this is an amazing story and so breathtakingly refreshing from all the other stuff out here on fictionpress! I really wish she'd tell the school she was savannah though :(

Yeah I know it was discontinued and all but could you please... re-continue it? Please, Im doing virtual puppydog eyes here

when i read the end of this chapter i wanted to throw the computer lolz i was like "no why'd u end it there!" XP Loved it _

I love it! update soon!

What you've written of this story totally blew me away! And I've read A LOT, so this is a huge compliment coming from me, and it's completely honest. I'm adding this to my favs and putting it on my alerts list. I'm loving where you're going with this so far, and will squeal like a little girl on her birthday when you update ;) Oh fuck... I just remembered you said this is discontinued :/
... Well my happy balloon just deflated. Poop it!
... dang, now I don't know what to say. Maybe beg you to update? Although I'm sure I'm the last pitiful fan in a long line of many... PWEEEASE UPDATE!
-randomly yours,
Grammar

I didn't expect to see Layton's POV. But it's interesting!

Oooh rich grandmother. I like!

awwww... i feel so sorry for savannah.

Awww, man... This story had me hooked. I love it.

can anyone tell me what her new account name is? thanks and I wish she'd just stuck to this account or told us what her new one is.

I've followed this story from the very beginning and to be honest, I was really disappointed that it's discontinued. It annoyed me to no end when you kept changing the story. I'll be reading the other Ugly Ducklig Turned Swan on your new account and I really hope you don't keep changing it. Anyway, sorry to be rude but I figured you'd wanna hear honest reviews. Good luck with your new account!