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| listen.to.your.heart. 2008-07-29 ch 8,  | abuseand the excitement starts to build up!! LOL j/k j/k great chapter tho |
| shiraz 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusethis is so nice and cute its i cant even describe it but its good like really good extraordinary, a beautiful tale. Shiraz |
| 324 2008-07-20 ch 5, anon. | abusei like the plot, it's going great guns so far, but i really need to point it out - watch out for your tenses! they switch so regularly! |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-15 ch 8, | abuseMercedes is no threat. She has nothing on Savannah. So what if Layton find out? Savannah or should I say Arella can still shut him down. I also bet he will fall in love with her. She stands up to him, she's hot, witty, and has a cool personality. She proabably impresses him. I just wonder what's going to happen with Nathan. Maybe he'll show up at her school and save her from some evil thing Layton has concocted. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THURSDATY!! Thank you for writing such an awesome story. :) |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-15 ch 7, | abuseOMG SAVANNAH! WOH!! I LOVE HER ATTITUDE! WOAH OMG THIS SCHOOL IS JUST GONNA GET ROCKED BY SAVANNAH!OH YEAH! HA Layton's gonna fall for her. I can't to see what everyone says when they find out THE blonde is Savannah. Awesome chapter ^_^ Arigato |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-15 ch 6, | abuseOh man! Damn it's true but Nathan liked Savannah from the first day he met her didn't he? He loved her personality. He's different from the other guys. He doesn't just want to get laid and have a hot chick hanging by his side. Savannah should've let him explain. He proabably has so much to say. Well let's see what happens next. Savannah is sure to give the bullies hell. I love this chapter though. It's full of emotion. I can feel and see what's going on. Gracias ^_^ |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-15 ch 5, | abuseOMG Savannah don't act like them. Damn and it was getting heated between her and Nathan. I hope it isn't true though. Just a rumor. Another great chapter Sweetness. (^__^) Thanks |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-13 ch 4, | abuseAnother awesome chapter by an awesome author. You are an amazing writer. Seems like King may be harboring some feelings for his "toy". He is sure in store for a surprise. |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-13 ch 3, | abuseNathan sounds like such a hottie. (^__^) Savannah is going to rock even more than she already does by the time she goes back to school. . .um well if she does. Great chapter. |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-13 ch 2, | abuseOh yeah and the tranformation from ugly duckling to swan commences! |
| JadedDreamWarrior 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI ** LOVE IT! |
| Ellkay 2008-07-12 ch 8, | abuseNice, I like it! It's an interesting storyline! |
| AuroraLightrays1990 2008-07-11 ch 8, | abuseokay you better keep your promise b/c i am positively drooling for more! |
| mimi 2008-07-09 ch 8, anon. | abusemore more more! |
| mimi 2008-07-09 ch 7, anon. | abusegigolo hahahaa go sav!! |