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| Riley Manx 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow this is so good. Even though it was short I still felt like I knew the characters. Very well done. |
| Phish With Lemon 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOne of my favorite stories on here.. Good job. |
| -TabKlaEleNic-Rio- 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseEle: Eh... Kla: Ah shut up Ele! You can relate! Ele: No I can't. Tab: Do we have to remind you? Ele: No... Nic: Yeah... anyways, AWESOME story! Kla: VERY!! Oh whoops, empty modifier.. Ele: Fuck that. It was a great story. Tab: Sure to win the Nobel Peace Prize. Ele: And then a purple heart right? Tab: Shut up. |
| 0ri 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseAw man, that's just adorable. I'm glad I found your sn. Very nicely written and really cute ending ~ |
| Nightmare Wolf 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed that... Quite a bit. You have something with this one. And I think if you ever got around to it, You could make it into a beautiful story. A longer one. I loved it. You have talent. |
| multiples of six 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWhoa.. this was really sad. :/ I love it though.. |
| camikaza 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow... That's just too sweet...If you're planning to enter this fic into a contest, you really should. Very well written, and I love the idea. I'm so glad it ended happily^^ Keep up the good work! |
| Hegge 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseLiked how you potraded your characters. |
| surrealphobia 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked how real this story was. The charecters are believable and the high school atmosphere is great. I think the end was ok, but it seemed a bit rushed to me. Or maybe that was just my anger over wanting more and the story abrutly ending. Whatever it was I liked it and hope you'll continue. If not it was a awesome one-shot. |
| softer side of apples 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS THE BEST STORY BY FAR I HAVE READ. I TO LOVE MY BESTFRIEND AND WE GREW APART AND ARGUE LIKE A OLD COUPLE ,BUT I LOVE HER SO MUCH. WE ARE BOTH HERE READING THIS AND WE ARE BOTH TEARING UP. LIFE IS SO SHORT AND THIS JUST BROUGHT US A LITTLE BIT MORE CLOSER... WE LOVE THIS STORY YOU SHOULD ENTER THIS STORY AND YOU WILL WIN 1ST PRIZE. |