 Aradia Cloud 2009-11-27 . chapter 14Update! Please! I was so into it. |
 Cupcake-of-Evil 2009-11-14 . chapter 14The new chapters really had my heart pounding!! I actually got really nervous about the whole Tyler thing and then the car crash! I also hope Nathaniel is alright...
You don't know how happy I was when I saw that you updated!!
P.S.
What did you mean on the part before chapter 12 about moving it/finishing somewhere else? If you are then what was the site for it did not show? I would really love to read the updates!! |
 Aradia Cloud 2009-11-13 . chapter 9What? Holy hell! Didn't see this one coming. Man Eternally; you keep me on the edge of my seat. |
 Aradia Cloud 2009-11-13 . chapter 8Oh... very interesting. LOL I just KNEW that Jay or Tory was gonna get everything. This is just awesome man. |
 Aradia Cloud 2009-11-13 . chapter 7Ha ha! The old bastard's dead. This is just lovely. |
 Aradia Cloud 2009-11-13 . chapter 6Stupid old effin geezer. Where the hell does he get off hitting Jayden in the ankle with a golf club? |
 Miraculous Recovery 2009-11-06 . chapter 14O
I can't wait until you post a new chapter.
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Can't wait. |
 portabellaprincess 2009-11-05 . chapter 14This story is awesome!:D
I just reread the first story yesterday.
I love the twist and turns and stuff.
I like how these chapters are longer.
Keep it up! ^__^
In both stories you posted a note but the website wasn't included of where you would be posting your stories. Is that the website on your profile/bio page? |
 Cassidy Valentin 2009-11-05 . chapter 13Just finished reading the chapters in FP and in webook. You really pulled some strings in the story! Now Jayden and Tory are now back to being brothers. [but still doesn't change some facts, so good-good] And it's going great. I wonder who's Shane's working with. [Hope it's not Nate]. Now I really start wondering who's telling the truth.
Looking forward to the update! thanks! |
 HazeleyedHoney 2009-11-04 . chapter 14The last two chapters were totally awesome! I like having Tory's POV for awhile. Its a nice change. On Chapter 12 you mention a website where you will be posting your work but it didn't show up on the page. Could you send it to me in a message or repost it with spaces in between each letter so ficpress will allow it to post? |
 Cassidy Valentin 2009-11-04 . chapter 14Hi! I need a little help, I'm getting confused with the story. Let me state/ask things from the chapter 13: New Extremes:
The Caroline-Curtis-Helena affair is in this sequence. Caroline & Curtis AND Helena & Shane --> Caroline & Shane AND Helena & Curtis --> then went back to the first one sequence again?
Which kid does Caroline found out that Helena was having and making her want Curtis back?
And what does Tory mean when he talked to Curtis in the hospital that Jayden was his son with her? Jayden is his son with Helena?
Tory and Nate are brothers which make their parents Helena and Shane. And makes Jayden his cousin. Is that right?
I'm not done reading the whole chapter because I'm getting so confused. Thanks! |
 Kurai Suki 2009-11-01 . chapter 12You can't read the website. All it says is '. com' Please give me the rest of it. I wanna keep reading your story! > |
 Cassidy Valentin 2009-11-01 . chapter 12hi! i just want to ask if the "now and forever yours" in webook is complete? PM me back for the answer! thanks! |
 Kurai Suki 2009-08-04 . chapter 11Please update soon!! I can't wait to see Jayden and Tory get married! Also, Alex is so cute! |
 Jacodey 2009-07-07 . chapter 11** you did it again love it can't weight for you to finsh it keep it going |