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| fatbird33 2008-03-30 ch 1,  | abusenummy |
| felicia13 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's true. I love the simplicity of this and the fact that it can relate to more than one topic... Lovely descriptions (I feel a little sick just reading this). My favorite line is the fourth ("A sick-sweet confection like any other.") Felicia. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseSweet poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| vaudeville summers 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseVery cute ;) I liked it a lot, despite the fact that it made me feel sick just thinking about it. The entire poem could be taken literally or quite symbolically, and I like that about it. Interesting poem. Cheers! ~Deanna |