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fatbird33
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abusenummy
felicia13
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseIt's true. I love the simplicity of this and the fact that it can relate to more than one topic...

Lovely descriptions (I feel a little sick just reading this). My favorite line is the fourth ("A sick-sweet confection like any other.")

Felicia.
Twilight Starr
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseSweet poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~
vaudeville summers
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abuseVery cute ;)

I liked it a lot, despite the fact that it made me feel sick just thinking about it.

The entire poem could be taken literally or quite symbolically, and I like that about it. Interesting poem. Cheers!

~Deanna
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