|Reviews for Can't wake up|
| Twilight Starr 11/6/07 . chapter 1
| AuraBorealis 11/6/07 . chapter 1
good work. keep writing
| Through Glass Eyes 10/29/07 . chapter 1
Amazing job. You should have made it a little more descriptive though to make a better picture but I still loved it.
| Almost-human 10/29/07 . chapter 1
| An Inside Joke 10/28/07 . chapter 1
I like the theme, but your language was very etherial with little concrete imagery. I think it would be a lot stronger with more descriptive imagery to balance out the more symbolic stuff.
| Eagle Seance 10/28/07 . chapter 1
Very nice. There's good cohesion and atmosphere in this poem. I like your use of repetition and half other-worldly tones in the subject.
| jojoba-music-girl 10/26/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this is truly amazing! I felt some kind of insecureness, yet certainty while reading this, as if I was the main character herself. Great job!
| Oracle of Destiny 10/25/07 . chapter 1
This is fantastic. I liked how you played with the words to portray a vivid image and also a very profound meaning. Well done xD!