Great poem.

Twilight Starr

good work. keep writing

Amazing job. You should have made it a little more descriptive though to make a better picture but I still loved it.

awesome...

I like the theme, but your language was very etherial with little concrete imagery. I think it would be a lot stronger with more descriptive imagery to balance out the more symbolic stuff.

Very nice. There's good cohesion and atmosphere in this poem. I like your use of repetition and half other-worldly tones in the subject.

Wow, this is truly amazing! I felt some kind of insecureness, yet certainty while reading this, as if I was the main character herself. Great job!

This is fantastic. I liked how you played with the words to portray a vivid image and also a very profound meaning. Well done xD!