aw. that was really sad. i hope your mom is ok

nice work and it isn't your fault

again, wow. yay! (if you didnt tell me your mom is dead, i dont know what to say. i hope this is figurative). anyways i love your style in this, and how you describe your mom in the first and second stanzas is great. luv ya babe :)

So sad, but I can kinda relate that's how I feel about Bob because of the war, I've lost him before I could really conect with him and let him know that his baby sister does care about him.

Wow you said it was not going to be peaches and cream. So it looks like we can both vent to the computer. I enjoyed it and i hope you are ok because i don't know i am just a jittery person

I really like this, the meaning of this is powerful, and the imagery is nice, the whole poem is good, you know, my favorite parts " no! let her go!

she’s mine!

let me take her back!

there was not enough time

to let her know that I truly cared.

tick. tick. tick.

the demons held her wrists

the wedding was over.

mommy was gone…" and the last lines were so touched..

ps: I like the things you wrote in your profile, specially the third paragraph "no one talks to (h)im

about how he lives..." is it your poem too?