Reviews for Farewell, My Twisted Snake

Basara 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abusetrapped in a fogged past... nice...
The Angry Conservative 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseNicely done. I think there needs to some kind of seperation between them though. Just remember that Haiku doesn't have to be 5-7-5 perfectly.
sylvia's syndrome 2007-10-25 ch 1,	abuseNice work! I liked the lines "silence is heavy" and "it all blurs tonight." Keep writing.