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| Fairybrat 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseSo...she's dead? I'm kind of confused. I don't understand what was going on here. |
| Purple Shell 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseo..so in the end she died becoz she kicked him away from her?? well, it may seemed creepy bt what the heck, evry1 needs something creepy once in a while... Despite the weird ending, I like it though..haha |
| Tabrias 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abusePretty interesting story... Has an eerie feeling to it. Maybe you can turn this oneshot into a short story. Despite some few errors I like how you did this. Keep writing. |