What I love about your writing is that, looked at aside from the content, is very simple in structure and not exactly elegant. However, you are somehow able to twist this to your advantage.
"So we went to buy some chickens" is so plain, and yet it evicted a loud chortle from me.
Your dialouge is flawless and I have yet to see a grammar mistake.
Good Job

I love this! It seems very original and I cannot wait for more :)

I can't wait to see more. It's very interesting, the pressures of family, the exasperation.

Oh my god I love it. xD! And what's amazing about this is that the storyline isn't all that strange. Someone I'm close to had been brought into this country for that same reason and fortunately, the guy treats her well.

I don't normally like reading first person POV's, but this one's worth it. Can't wait for the next update!

*applause*
You are brilliant