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| jrsparkus 2008-08-27 ch 1,  | abusewonderful! amazing work, but i have a question; what are you (beast)? you said you were a beast trapped in the ice, but are you a dinosaur (sorry if misspelled, my spellings bad), or a mythical/fantasy creature, or something else? sorry, just wondering. |
| Adrian Foley 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseTwo for two so far. This was most excellent. I'm definitely favorite-ing you. |
| Tikklz 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseVery vivid detail. I was picturing all of this in my mind's eye as I read. Seemed very surreal and animalistic. An interesting perspective that I thoroughly enjoyed. |
| bleedmeout 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI love this. the words are very vivid. makes me think. keep it up. xerin |
| Xerophyte 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI love what you've done with global warming being bad for the environement but necessary for warming her heart. I the way you made a figurative global warming a necessary evil; you created a wonderful parallel. Aah, the paradox that is modern day society... Wonderful job. Thanks so much for your review, sorry it took me so long to review back. Life gets in the way sometimes :D |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. I love the metaphor in this, how you compared global warming to love, searching for someone. There is some great imagery in this, too; I love the line "Cardiac decay in the depths of the Arctic." Really nicely done. And the repetition worked very well, too. Keep writing! :) |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusecoinkydink i was thinking about global warming as well ... makes you think huh? love the buildup, and how it gets killed - humanity does this quite a bit sometimes (what should be a prelude to some great beginning.. is as always, a trick of the mind.) The glacier/ice theme references fit in really well, and the formatting really helps emphasise certain aspects. as always, this kicks **. hopefully we can all open our eyes, get out of our muse, and do something very, very soon. |
| Icicle Tears 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHmm...this isn't quite what I had in mind when I first saw it--it surprised me...which authors rarely do. So, this was a nice change...anyway--nice job, as always. But...you'll have to explain a bit to me. Are you actually *hoping* for global warming? I'm a tad confuzzled. As always, Tyler |