I like this ]Update soon!

PLease keep writing, I love your story. Will we find out where Chris is in the next chapter? The suspense is killing me...keep writing.

Wow, I love your story. You have to update soon! I hate cliffies, but i love them at the same time if that's possible! Please update soon! :)

oh my god. wheres chris? i hope we see him in the next chapter.i mean come on. why would he leave his sister alone with a alcohlic mother? well please update soon and WHERE IS CHRIS?

UPDATE SON!

Gar! Valentine... is a bit of a jerkface

But that's probably what you wanted him to come across as.

love it

while you may love cliffys, i hate them...lolz please update! i gotta know what happened to Chris!

Aw Chris can't be gone that's just too sad. She'll be all alone

Don't you steal Chris away from me! You tell me where he is so I can find him and scold him for running off like that, that goose. Goodness goshness I just want to know where he is.

And cliffhangers don't al;ways get people places. It's like watching LOST, or something. They only continue to puzzle thhe crap out of you until you give up...and you only give up until the next episode and your addictedly watching it again. Reading/watching cliffhanger materials/shows should be counted as substance abuse. I should therefore be sent to a loony bin.

Damn cliffhangers.

Lurve,

- Self-Diagnosed ADD

love it

I love this story and the way you write! Keep writing, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Miss Drizzle

There were a few mistakes here and there, um.. "Mom had left her usually note on the counter" and "I couldn’t like, Matt had been decent during the lunches"

The second one confused me, but the first one I got, I just wanted to point that out to you because you said to do so.

Um, I like where this is going though, this story always makes me laugh somehow. Keep writing!

UDPATE SOON!

You said to point out mistakes well erm one part it says " Mom had left her usually note " usually should be usual? Heh, and alright is suppose to be all right. It's the proper spelling, but most people just put "alright", so I guess it doesn't really matter. Sorry if that sounded too picky. Love the chapter, right soon!

-Faded and Forgotten