Ahh I really feel for Julie ;_;
I hope in the future her self-esteem can sky-rocket like mine did years ago. I love public presentations now :)
This story is very entertaining and I love all your characters 8D

I finished reading My Entity a while back and I didn't know there was a sequel *falls over*
I'm so excited to read this 8D
My Entity was a blast! a fantastic one at that

I think you should make this a trilogy. One from Ashe's Point Of View. One from Wes's Point Of View. and the last from Julie's Point of view.

We still need to know what happened Gav's friend. And Julie still needs a happy ending. What do you say? Yes? No? Please?

You did a great job on both 'My Entity' and 'My Ninja' by the way.


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Tisk Tisk. Not very Christianly of Kyle to help Kyoko make Wes jealous. But still pretty awesome of him! =) I think you did a wonderful job with this story. I enjoyed the plot very much. I feel as if you left a possibility open of doing a story with Julie in it. I feel like she needs some love! I've always enjoyed her character from afar and think that she'd make a good protagonist. Anyways, thank you for writing this wonderful story! It's been a joy reading it.

Cassandra

Aw . . . how sweet.

Cassandra

Lose her forever?!?!?!? Why would you say such a terrible thing?!

Cassandra

Dun Dun Dun! Why would she want to be him?? I mean, he's like a boy. Gross. lol.

Cassandra

Amazing that two immortal souls went to the same school! Ah, the consequences that come with fictional writing. Maybe after this is finished, everybody can be friends with Alyssa again. I wonder what it would feel like to have an entity (haven't used that word in a while!) take over your body. Freaky, that is for sure. Here's hoping they can get rid of that evil entity (heh!) without killing the brown-eyed Alyssa!

Cassandra

Since he didn't ACTUALLY kill somebody, he's not grounded. That is simply priceless. I love his parents, btw. I wish they would have some more face-time. And what's with guys and not being able to just SAY how they feel. Geez! She probably thinks he was laughing at her or disgusted by her kiss. When really he's just as enamored with her as she is with him. Or something.

I so totally KNEW Alyssa was up to no good. Never trust a girl who can't do her own homework.

Cassandra

Oh whoa! This is completely heartwrenching. It may have taken you a long time to write this out. But you did it perfectly. I think you expressed Kyoko's pain perfectly. I only hope that the moment really WAS deleted from the camera. If not, then I see trouble ahead . . .

Cassandra

Seeing Eye Boy! Heh. And this chapter didn't offend me at all. Of course, this may be because I'm a youth ministry major and thus love to see youth ministers helping others learn more about the beauty and nature and wonder of a true relationship with God. When Wes was talking about his feelings for Alyssa, I thought you also hit that on the nail as well. Anyways, great chapter as usual. I really don't know why you haven't gotten more reviews. I think that although the subject matter is different (Wes doesn't have person in his head) this is actually better written. That, of course, is probably because Ashe was more of a rambler, which I adore about her. On to the next chapter!

Cassandra

You know there actually ARE programs so that the blind can use computers. But the idea that her grandfather is part of the conv. is SO much better. I particularly loved her grandfather responding: absolutely not. I also really liked everybody sign-in names, even if Ashe's terrible chat speak bothered me. Chat speak = evil!

Cassandra

I imagine him saying "bleep" at the end of this chapter instead of "crap". But great chapter, overall! I love that we finally get to know more about Kyoko. And it's also a nice tidbit to know that she was born blind, because I has been wondering if she was born that way or if she lost her sight through some ninja battle.

Cassandra

I have just decided that Alyssa is the killer. There is no reason for me to believe this. I just don't like her all that much, so I want to pin murder on her.

Cassandra

Oh! And I loved his texting line.

If I were a principal and there was a rumor that the quiet, nerdy boy in school had a gun, I'd be all up on that. It's always the ones who are constantly abused by their classmates who finally crack. lol. Except it's not really funny.

Cassandra