This was beautiful. (:
I love the style; I don't understand the author's note, because I thought this was wonderfully written.

I don't really like romance stories all that much (mostly because the ones I have tried seem sappy and too similar), but this kept me reading. This was different. I really like the 'format' you created - the riddle part pulled me in.

The answers in the end were unbelievably sweet.
Amazing work.

woah.
that's so sweet ^^
i heart fluffy stuff . xD

update My Own Wings soon yeah?
=]

aw... that was so cute ^^ write more! =) the guy seemed so... -thinking of right word- mystical?? xD OMG! piano exam next week!! -panics- breathe... must breathe... update ure main story soon!

Aww...this is cute. A bit rushed, but you're not exactly the person for extreme details, are you, not that that's necessarily a bad thing? (I do believe I just might have the right to say that...) But I love the entire east meets west thing, though some of it confused me...where does the magical place come in? Or is it supposed to allude to something I can't figure out?

UPDATE SOON!

You didn't fix the 'Sun' at the end. The capital.

It's squishy. Fluffy. ^^ Probably also the angstiest thing you've ever written. And that's probably a good thing.

x.yana

(Stop putting yourself down!)

aw this was so cute!!

You really shouldn't question your writing ability, because this was lovely. I love the way he speaks in riddles, and how utterly confused she is by them. If it had been me, I would have had no idea how to answer.

The language you use, and the way you put words together is simply beautiful. Really.

A few minor grammar things, because I can't help myself:
'At sunset, he takes her to a nearby lake, onto a red wooden bridge and gives her the last question. His eyes wander around taking in the scenery, before he asks...' There should be a comma after 'bridge,' and another after 'around.'

Like I said, this was chillingly beautiful. Fantastic job.

Cheers,
Sammy