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Written 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseinteresting way of looking at things. I sort of agree with the first reviewer, but I can also see what you're trying to say. this sort of reminds me of a scene from The Sword in the Stone by TH white (an agnostic). It's basically a beaver (I think? or a badger) telling a story to arthur about how man became god's favorite creation or whatever, and the story is really cute, and it's about how man has the ability to use tools, so even though he is never as developed as a panther or a bear, he's still 'better' than them or something. it's basically a fable, but it would take too long to summarize the whole thing. but then the beaver/badger is like... but seriously? humans aren't that cool. and it's like. kind of a reality check.
TalkingMime 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept. I like how you phrased the idea.
Ryan Schiff 2007-10-25 ch 1,	abuseIf humans want (I dont know why you changed tences in the second line) to be strong, why would they create a stronger being. Making an argument that "God" was created, more powerful than humans, so that humans could not be surpassed makes no sence. A better arguement would be that humans create gods because they can claim devine protection for their actions (if we destroy people that do not believe in our god(s), we are doing the will of our god(s)...)