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| miscellanea 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseI was going to point out my favorite parts, but all of the parts are my favorite parts. Really good. |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseSo grotesque yet beautiful. I loved the first stanza the most. |
| blackrosestears 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery eerie...nice job. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery that you use to discribe the physicality of this person is harsh, even ugly at times, but I think that that lends to the overall feeling of true self beneath the exterior of skin-feel of this poem. It's a powerful metaphor for anything in life, and you do well to take it on here. I think that my favorite stanza is the one that begins 'without lips, I'm kissing' really well done with this, reading your work always makes me happy. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| DiaRose 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely dazzlingly amazingly beautiful, and original. So perfectly individual... I really love this. Love, ~Dia |
| painted.music 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abusekonban wa This poem was so... COOL! There's just no other word to describe it. :D It just had beautiful imagery, etc, etc, etc. I could go on about all the awesome parts of this poem, but I've sort of got things to do. :P Let's see... before I go, I'll just tell you my favorite line. Easier said than done, of course, since I loved most of them. "Unzipping my skin from my fingertips," I guess is the one I would choose if I had to narrow it down to a grand total of one. Zaijen -Shan- |
| the face in the window 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseSo many awesome lines. You have so much skill. Rowan. (Eek. I updated. You should go look. xD) |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely briiliant! Such a unique and ringing thought! I really liked these two lines "I’m dancing in my skeleton Tiptoe tapping away from reality" the best of the whole poem. Keep writing! ~the Stranger in the moonlight |