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Reviews For: Paint My Heart Black

the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good. It had an excellent ring to it and reminded me of the awesome song "pain it black". It stung with acidity and that takes just the right level of sarcasm to hit it right. Very well written on my faves.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
kloun doll
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abusethe imagery is dark but sad too. it's as if you wanna fight against that feeling but you can't..

good poem.
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