aww i thought it was cute!!

Wow...my heart was totally moved by this fic...I can't even imagine being afraid of society like that...
When I read the first few paragraphs I thought Jared was a normal kid (I laughed when I read the 16 year old part ^.^) Then when I read the part where he wasn't going with his sister to school and the part where he tried (word underlined) my mind froze and I thought "what?". This chapter was really deep and like practically every one of your stories, had me hooked. I love the way you portray Jared, he seems so normal...it doesn't seem at all like he has a disease. And that girl Amber, Jared might change with her around...

Anyway, I love the way you ended it too. Just the hint that he might change and he might be able to go outside. Even if it's little by little.

Again, wow...I'm completely speechless...

~Saira

that was awesome!
u should write more of it.

Aww, I don't think it was that horrible. I think the story was really sweet. Simple, yet so sweet ^_^!
I liked this a lot =). Good job!